Thread:Bepbopmemo/@comment-32712012-20180821151016

Hi Bepbopmemo, and thanks for your edit to the Chapter 4: Golden Ridge page! I really appreciate your addition of a plot summary to the page, as it was in dire need of one.

I noticed a small error in your edit that seemed to violate this wiki's Neutrality policy. The sentence in question (with the rule-violating part bolded) was: "Madeline, stubborn as she is, brushes her off and continues her way through the level." As I see it, this violates the policy, as it outright states that Madeline is being stubborn in her decision. Madeline is definitely not being willing to change her opinion, but stubbornness has a negative connotation, so even though the Old Woman says that Madeline is being stubborn, I don't think that it's a good idea for us to quote her on it.

If you didn't realize that this would be a problem, no worries; I've changed it to a somewhat more neutral sentence: "Madeline, determined to continue regardless, brushes her off and continues through the level." I'm hoping that this should help fix the problem as I see it. If there is still a problem that I'm not seeing, please let me know, and I will definitely see what I can do to try to work things out so that we're both happy with the conclusion.

Thanks again for adding that plot summary! I really do appreciate the help. 